Evie’s New Body – #SatSpanks #SeductiveSnS #ASMSG

When Evie, a dominant lesbian yearns for Christie, a straight girl, she projects her consciousness into Dan, the girl’s lover, little realizing that Dan is a submissive and that Christie is his young Dominatrix. The situation spins rapidly out of control and Evie finds herself trapped inside Dan’s body during an especially aggressive D/s scene involving multiple partners, cock-caging, bondage and female domination. Find out what happens in my latest work – Evie’s New Body – when the term “she-male” takes on an entirely new meaning.

This is a snippet from Evie’s New Bodyavailable May27th!

EvieSmaller“I think these will do nicely.” The young woman held up a pair of frilly, pink satin panties with lots of white lace trim. Oddly enough, there was a small zipper in the front of the panties, and the zipper was topped by a pink ribbon.

Evie gasped loudly, and Christie looked up. “You don’t approve of my choice, pet?”

Dan shook his head wildly. It was his lips from which the gasp had escaped, but it wasn’t he who had made the noise. Dan had no idea why he’d made a sound. He knew that he had to remain completely silent, lest his punishment grow more savage.

But Evie was of a different mind. Like most women, she wore panties, but hadn’t laid hands nor eyes on something so girly since she was a child. “Frilled, pink panties!” she thought. “What the fuck?” She kept the thoughts to herself. If she was going to have a chance to fuck Christie, Evie would have to learn to keep silent. She eyed the panties warily.

Christie stood up. She had the panties in one hand and a riding crop in the other. She threw the lacy undergarments on the floor in front of Dan, then gestured with the crop. “Step into them,” she said, her voice cold and low. “Don’t pull them up.” Christie looked down at Dan from the height of her heels. “Just bend over and grab the waistband.”

As though he knew what was expected of him, Dan shuffled forward and put his feet in the legs of the panties. Then Dan took a deep breath as he bent down, and grabbed the waistband of the frilly undergarments; Evie sensed the silkiness of the panties through Dan’s touch. But she also realized that their shared ass was naked and vulnerable.

Christie gracefully raised her right hand high above her shoulder. “You know what’s coming, pet,” Christie whispered. Dan closed his eyes and Evie was plunged into darkness. Dan’s entire body trembled with Evie’s frustration and worry. “One stroke is one inch. Two strokes is two inches.”

Awkwardly, Dan nodded. He took a chance and repeated Christie’s commands under his breath: “One inch, one stroke. Two inches, two strokes.” Evie had no idea what the fuck either of them were talking about. It was dark. She was afraid. And both Dan and Christie were mumbling nonsense.

“Don’t forget the count, pet.”

Those were the last words Evie heard, before a shrill whistle cut the air.



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26 responses to “Evie’s New Body – #SatSpanks #SeductiveSnS #ASMSG

  1. Wow, Alice. That snippet and your blurb are different from anything else I’ve ever read. Body switching in this context is a fascinating concept. I look forward to reading more, though I suspect I’m going to be wincing–a lot. Thanks for sharing.

    • Even I winced when I was writing this story. Dan is a true sissy, and Christie is somewhat of a savage Dominatrix. Evie has no idea of what’s in store for her as the tagalong in Dan’s body. 🙂

      Thanks for stopping by for the read and thoughts!

  2. Agree with Kathryn, different than anything I’ve read! Cara has one as well with a body switch which has me totally intrigued. Great, sexy snippet – as is expected when one visits Alice Dark…

  3. Wow, indeed. What a concept. So creative, and so challenging to write, to strike the right balance between Evie’s consciousness and Dan’s. Love the conflict/twist that lesbian dominatrix Evie is forced into the role of a male submissive..

    • You’ve touched on the hardest part of this story, Cara – writing a character that has two minds in one body. Making it even more challenging was that Evie was aware of Dan, but not the other way around. It took me weeks to sort this one out. But Natasha says you’ve written a body-switch as well: I need to read it!

      Thanks for checking out the snippet and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it!

  4. I have never read anything about body switching…holy crow. This is hot….

    • So sweet of you to say, Adaline! I just got to thinking about boys’ fascination with she-males, and decided to put a new spin on the story. Believe me – it was fun!

      Thanks for reading and commenting, doll. But don’t think it’s going to get you out of your Spankee Doodle Dandy spanking. 🙂

  5. Laughing here. Serve Evie right for her attempted rape, but I hope poor Dan isn’t damaged more than he likes. Interesting concepts.

    • Evie is properly punished for her wayward ways, and Dan thouroughly enjoys every moment. In their own ways, both are wicked. Thanks for coming by!

  6. I was thinking as I was reading this how hard it must have been for you to keep track with the two minds in the one body! Such a different concept, such a hot scene!

    • Thank you Casey! It was a challenge keeping two minds in a single body, but since one of them was unaware of the merge, it wasn’t as hard as it could have been. Thanks for reading!

  7. Agreeing with the other’s in “body switching” making for a compelling story tread for sure… And your descriptive frills in the wardrobe uniquely moves the switch into place for the reader with just the right amount of angst… ☀

    • Ah, the wardrobe: I think every boy should wear a corset at least once in his life. 🙂 Thanks, Joseph. This body jump was a fun story to write.

  8. reneeroseauthor

    Wow, what a great premise!!

  9. You’re very creative, Alice. I always enjoy your stories.

  10. Very creative and different!

  11. Oh My Hotness! I am so wondering how they share a mind. Where did that come from and how it will play out. Terrific snippet.

    • Thanks Susan! For Dan I’ll go ahead and say that it works out just fine; he gets what he wants. But for Evie … one Dominant in the hands of another Dominant … Very much fun throughout. 🙂

  12. This is very different and I loved it. Such a complicated this to write but you did it so well. Apart from being in a male body, it will be interesting for Evie the dominant to be on the other side of the punishment if that makes sense. Great snippet Alice 🙂

  13. This is an interesting concept I haven’t seen before. Well written snippet, Alice!

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