Reader requests and fantasies are the genesis of my latest story – Camp Spank. Not long ago, one reader requested a military story, while another wants me to explore voyeurism. In Camp Spank, I combined the two fantasies for a delicious story about two young women who break the Army’s rules and cause misery for the rest of their squad. The other women in the troop band together to punish the wayward privates, but that punishment is exposed when two young men sneak into camp to spy on the girls.
In the excerpt below, Private Lori Griffin carefully steers her squadmates toward a punishment of Mandy and Bri that will satisfy the rest of the young women in the squad, and yet still stay within her sergeant’s guidelines of “no permanent damage.”
“I’m as pissed off as any of you,” Lori said finally. Darkness had closed in on the four women, and they were sitting at a picnic table outside of the squad’s tent. The rest of Charlie Squad had turned in for the evening, though they could hear the girls squabbling inside the canvas structure. “But we have to do this correctly.” Lori wriggled on the bench; her butt was still sore from the previous evening’s whipping.
“Fuck correct.” Staci spit the words out. “Those fucking cunts are the reason we’re out here tonight.”
“Yeah!” Rosemary swept her fingers through her bright red hair. “I’m tired of this shit.”
“We could break their knees.” Kiyoko’s face was impassive, though her bright green eyes sparkled. The Asian girl was serious, and Lori knew that she had to steer the conversation away from permanent damage. If either Mandy or Bri had serious injuries in the morning, the entire squad would suffer.
“No,” Lori whispered fervently. She thought about the sergeant’s warning against a blanket party. “If we do anything dangerous or permanent, we’ll all end up in the stockade.”
“So you’re saying we should let them go?” There was a warning note in Staci’s voice. Her rage would not be denied.
“I’m not saying that at all.”
“So what are you saying?” Rosemary’s anger grew alongside of Staci’s. She was tired of suffering for the behavior of two people she didn’t give a shit about.
“I’m saying that we can have a party for those two. Tonight.”
“A party?” Kiyoko arched a perfectly formed eyebrow. “Returning good for evil fits with Buddhist thought, but I don’t believe it will work with those two. They are intractable.”
“Not just any party,” Lori said. “A certain kind of party.” The young brunette was careful with her words. She couldn’t defy Sergeant Watson’s orders, but Lori believed that Dominique would approve of what she had planned. “Every woman in this squad has a hairbrush.”
“So?”
“We have a hairbrush party.” Lori squirmed on the bunk. Her ass burned as she thought about the type of punishment she was about to propose. It would be appropriate and timely. “And during the party, each and every one of the women in our troop extracts 15 demerits worth of punishment out of Mandy and Bri.”
I can’t wait to hear more on the actual punishment please… :)HOT. You know I can’t open your site with my kids around, right? All those damned covers. LOVE them.
Thanks, Natasha! To be honest, I love being NSFW … and believe me, some serious punishment is headed Bri and Mandy’s way. 🙂
OMG I just checked my email, I forgot I do not receive notifications through my email (gmail) anymore. I’m just now reading this, I feel like I’m late to the party!
So just how many does that at add up to? Those two boys are going to get an eyeful. I love voyeurism in a story. Its just so naughty!
Hmmm … let’s see. Lori, Kiyoko, Staci and Rosemary make four. That’s a nice start. But there are 20 young women in this squad, and Bri and Mandy have managed to piss all of them off. 😉 Thanks for reading, Tara!
Very hot!!
I like military stories!
Great job, Alice
🙂
Thanks, Katherine! There’s a bit of the old military in this particular story – back when they still believe a good caning might help a soldier learn a little quicker. 😉
Your ideas are always so much fun! You know how to turn spanking into a sport!
Thanks, Cara. I appreciate you coming by for a read!
That’s some punishment – I hate hairbrushes! But it’s a wonderful scene and I’m going to love reading the actual punishment.
Thanks, PK! A hairbrush does have a wonderful sting to it. 🙂
My butt hurts just reading that, girl. Ouchie!
Aw, thanks! Just waiting till the spanking begins.
A hairbrush party? That doesn’t sound good. (Well, sort of)
I promise, Starla. It’s a lovely party. You should come, too! 😉
Yes…oh that was rhetorical? lol That sounds scary painful my dear…
Very painful, but not at all permanent. Just something that Bri and Mandy will remember for a very long time. Thanks for reading!
Hairbrush party? Ooooo. Wow. Very hot. Even though I wouldn’t trust my klutzy self with a gun, this sounds like my kind of camp.
Funny you should mention a gun, Daizie. I was just writing that part … you know … where the women with the guns catch the peeping toms. 🙂
I’m so freaking excited on hearing about the hairbrush party!!!! 🙂 *evil grin*
It’s a totally wicked party, my dear. But you must stay and enjoy the special ending. 😉
Kiyoko scares me a little, but I can picture her anger too. Looking forward to reading more.
I’m still trying to decide whether I should let Kiyoko deliver a spanking to someone other than Bri and Mandy. The hairbrush party, while boisterous and delivering a punishing message, is somewhat controlled. Lori is not as violent as Kiyoko, but she’s clearly the leader of the squad. But there are other spankings and whippings to be delivered in this novelette … and I wonder – should I let Kiyoko have a swing?
Thanks for reading, Celeste. You’ve given me much to think about.
“We have a hairbrush party.” Lori squirmed on the bunk. Her ass burned as she thought about the type of punishment she was about to propose. It would be appropriate and timely. “And during the party, each and every one of the women in our troop extracts 15 demerits worth of punishment out of Mandy and Bri.”
15 demerits, does that equal 15 spanks that each girl gets to give to the lovely ladies??? If so….ouchie, ouchie, ouchie!
Sounds yummy! I’d be scared to let Kiyoko get a swat in. She’d probably use more force than was needed. Maybe she does, and gets punished just like the girls she hates? It’d add a bit of humiliation to the story! 😉
I like the way you think, Nora. You have a wicked mind, and that’s something I find delicious. Thanks for reading!
Alice that is a great story idea! And for the record, I like “NSFW” and anything that says “censored” on it, I’m drawn to like a moth to a bug zapper. Heh.
This gives me serious shivers! I love it, Alice!
Thanks, Dinah! While I’m writing this story at a reader’s request, I’ve always wanted to explore a military story. There’s so much discipline! 🙂
OOh I can’t wait to come to this party! Loved it Alice 🙂
It’s a very serious part, Constance, but we’re all welcome to sit down and have some fun … wait … maybe I shouldn’t sit down. 😉 Thanks for reading!
How many more days of writing do you have planned? Inquring minds want to know. 🙂
Hard to say. Being sick for nearly a week threw me off schedule. But I should know more this week. I’ll write today, and that will give me a better idea.
Five star excellence as usual. Can’t wait!
Makes me wonder about the “new Army” — is it so new after all? 🙂 I love the dynamic here. Well done.
Thank you, Patricia!
A hairbrush party…count me in!!!
So glad to have you along!
YAY!!!
ooh, a hairbrush party!! Sounds like my kind of party!
Looking forward to hearing more #Iamwriting tweets tonight. 🙂 if at all possible, and if it does not slow you down. Do not want you to lose your train of thought
So good, Alice. Sometimes the ones in anger are best ones of all. . .
Too-shay Emily. You hit the nail on the head. 🙂
Thanks, Emily. Eighteen young women are very unhappy, and that displeasure is about to show. 🙂
Oh my… shivering in anticipation.
Thanks!
I like NSFW, too. Can’t wait to read about the punishment.
This one will be epic, my dear. Thanks for reading!
She’s squirming on her bunk and I’m squirming on mine. Oh wow! I want to have a hairbrush party! Er…or maybe not, but I do want to read about one! Excellent snippet, Alice! Also, you have the most sexy covers going on!
yum 😀 hairbrushes 😀